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Re: if the dead man could speak to me
An extremely interesting concept with brilliant execution. The pacing was spot on, the structure was good, I loved the use of first person POV and the language used was very ...
Dec 6, 2017 -
Re: 1.
Interesting theme to go with, I have to say, but as an avid basketball fan, I have to admit I enjoyed it. The extensive range of vocabulary and the pacing ...
Dec 6, 2017 -
Re: the spiders
Well, you managed to creep me out, and I'm not even afraid of spiders! Really good use of imagery and the structure was dead on. Maybe try and avoid using ...
Dec 6, 2017 -
Re: Prologue
Thank you, that's so nice! I've never really had anyone give me feedback on my writing before, so this is pretty cool. If you don't mind me asking, what about ...
Dec 6, 2017 -
Re: ~Suckers 3~
I really like this! It was really cute and I like the POV. A few minor spelling mistakes, but those aren't the end of the world. The pacing was good, ...
Dec 5, 2017