HollyM64

Hi! Thank you so much for the feedback! While the drama was a big part of the chapter, I was also trying to introduce both Calvin and Raven to the ...

Thanks for the review! Punctuation and grammar have never been my strongest points but I am working on it! As for Emmy, I think you might like her a little ...

This is really good! You're good at creating an atmosphere, even in such a short poem, which is a skill in itself. It has a distinct fairy feel, which makes ...

Hi! Thank you for the feedback, it really is helpful! To answer one of the later questions, yes Emmy is American but the school itself is an English boarding school, ...

Sorry, that was meant to be "in response to" typing on a phone is hard lol

Thanks this is really nice! I kinda needed the first couple of chapters to be a bit more chill because I intend for things to get a little more "magical" ...

Thanks for the feedback! Outsiders was supposed to be a stand-in title until I could think of something more appropriate, so it will most likely change at some point and ...

Thank you! That's really nice to hear, glad you're enjoying it!

As always, I greatly appreciate the feedback! Don't worry, you haven't heard the last of Othero, and the prologue does have a purpose. I'll be sure to let you know ...

Thanks for the feedback! Grammar has never been my strongest suit I'm afraid. Othero and the prologue were a set up for something a little later (not to spoil anything) ...

Hey! It's good to be back lol. I really appreciate the feedback, and thank you for the structure point on Othero's magic, I hadn't even thought of that! Next chapter ...

Thank you, this was really good feedback! And don't worry, you will see Othero again, but not for a little while :)

No no, I appreciate the feedback! Prologues aren't for everyone, I get that, I just love writing them. Any feedback on my first chapter is welcome too :)

Thanks for the feedback, it's really useful! And don't worry about the "Spunky Female Protagonist" thing, I wrote Flora to be a side character. I do have a third protagonist ...

Aww that you, that's really sweet!