Hollow

Hi there! Your story seemed interesting, but left me so confused. Let's start from the beginning. Sitting by his lonesome, he's propped before a vase. Lonesome what? Lonesome isn't a ...

It was okay for my taste, but I feel as if it was a little dull. Also, I found one word that was a little awkward: “Children, come quickly! The ...

I like it, but I'm a little confused about the feel. At the beginning, it feels as if the narrator the narrator is scolding for what you've done, but at ...

I liked the feel of this poem very much. It seemed regretful in a way, although I'm confused on what it's about. I think that's just me because I've always ...

That was great! I love the eerie feeling it gave with the descriptions of this man and with him only being a mile away. I also like how vividly you ...

I just like background in writings. Some people might think differently. I just think it adds to the personality of the character, but I may be wrong. I hope you ...

I loved that. I've always loved wildlife, but I never thought I'd be completely interested in a story like that. As someone else said, it has a great flow to ...

Overall, I thought this was a good topic to hit on. There are many stories on World War Two and soldier's families, but I feel as if not very many ...