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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 5

    sooo, it feel like forever since I read this.....I gotta get better at time management man....lol but real talk, you know I love this story, so I do not have ...

    Apr 19, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Black Scale (a snippet of Ch. 1)

    Dec. 2015, lol well I am 100% sure you wont finish this story, I would be a true fan of what I read if I didn't try to encourage you ...

    Apr 15, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Ace of Hearts [Chapter 1]

    As far as story goes you did a pretty damn good job. I for one liked it, although I am beyond confused. It's not your fault at all though just ...

    Mar 20, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Something More, Something Unique Chapter 1

    Okay, It's everyone's favorite holiday, back at it again with a review. So this story.....has a relatively fast pace and a lot of people say that is a bad thing, ...

    Mar 13, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Wrong Era Chapter 7

    "She couldn't bring herself to ask, but what the hell was a save-file?" Lol the greatest line in the book. Okay, so what it do, moalex. It's been a while ...

    Mar 3, 2018
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: gone

    Very dark. Had a minky vibe....a taste a depression, a pinch of feelings, and one cup of you someone's soul, oh yeah....this poem would defiantly be number one in today's ...

    Jan 25, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Billi Wack and the Story of Mystery- Chapter 4.2

    So voices......lol it's official Sarah gotta be put down. Eagle eye when you have eyes on the target you have the green light to shoot....lml, hello Tuesday, it's me Kwanza, ...

    Jan 3, 2018
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Deity Project: Theme III - Love

    This poem I can feel it it. If nobody has never been alone their life then they wouldn't understand what it feels like to find that one person. That person ...

    Dec 30, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Mage and The Immortal Chapter 1

    It's Review time!!!! So As I can see this is a true work of art you have going here and I read a few reviews on this. Overall I feel ...

    Dec 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: Poetry

    Lol, You by far was just being silly!!!! And dont take that the wrong way because life sucks with out all the laughs and giggles. Before I hope into my ...

    Nov 14, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1)

    OOO, a werewolf story, that is what I had the liberty of reading and reviewing today, and I think this story has great potential. One because the werewolf thing isn't ...

    Nov 8, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Shattered Souls: Chapter 1

    So at first I got this ghost whisper feelings like this story was going to be like that but as I read on my feelings change. Have you ever seen ...

    Nov 7, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Wrong Era: Chapter 6

    I dont like it, I dont like it one bit. Jenifer Reese gives me the chills like Pennywise does....lol but other than that this chapter right here........FIRE!!!! Loved everything about ...

    Nov 2, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Brain Collector

    Today's date Oct. 31.....That's right its Halloween and I needed something to get me in the mood. And let's say this piece was defiantly a mood changer. Yous had my ...

    Oct 31, 2017
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Twin Blades Chapter 2 The Police Station

    Rubbing my chin analyzing story mentally. Hmhmm, Very nice structure. I like the charters. Kevin seem to be a superhuman......Zombie Apocalypse....Yeah this story has an overall great shape. All I ...

    Oct 29, 2017


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