HoliBanana

I must commend you on your engaging narrative and the immersive world you've created. Your talent for storytelling shines through in your vivid descriptions of the characters, their emotions, and ...

Im not sure if the start was a joke or not XD but, I noticed you kept repeating yourself in the beginning - "My story begins in this world, hidden ...

I love the story and how you word it. I love the place they are at and the setting feels soothing with a little sense of mystery/unease. The story itself ...

Your story truly shines in the way you portray each character's unique personality! This aspect makes it stand out remarkably and, if maintained as a central focus, will undoubtedly set ...