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  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Public Speech-Communism

    I agree, communism is a terrible thing. Where did you get that figure about 14 billion people living in communist countries? There are only 6 billion people on the whole ...

    Feb 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Random Poem

    It's A Masterpiece! This is the funniest thing I've read in ages. I can relate to you wanting to marry a book - I want to marry a poem now ...

    Feb 27, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: An Ode to Google

    Great to see another poem that isn't depressing. This reminds me a lot of Dr Seuss, which is great for you because he's one of the only poets I know ...

    Feb 27, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Untitled (for now)

    Firstly, there's the grammatical issue of comma positioning. You've placed commas at the start of the next word, when they should be at the end of the previous word. full ...

    Feb 27, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Poop Poop

    Hmm. No comment. I found your poem about phobias funny. I'm not so sure about this one though. I like the randomness, but not the idea of eating poo. The ...

    Feb 27, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Phobia Phobia Phobia

    I really like this. My sense of humour is a bit non mainstream, and usually the more funny I find something, the less funny other people find it. I wouldn't ...

    Feb 26, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Ashes to Ashes, Dust to Dust

    I found this confusing, are they real cats or figments of his imagination? The way they "materialize" and "Orbit" makes them seem like they are imaginary or ghosts, but he ...

    Feb 26, 2009


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