HikariMocha

peanut19 basically just pinpointed all the mistakes- but other then that- i find these lyrics very beautiful. Anyone can relate to this if they had one had a unrequited love ...

i fell in love with this. very beautiful and touching. i loved how you portrayed how the bad and good colors kinda balance each other out. how each one of ...

simply beautiful. i love how you added the poetic device repetition into this- very well played. i feel this :] amazing poetry and writingg skills, you seem to have in ...

Bravo! Very well done :D i cant pick out a favorite part-- they were all too good! cant wait to read moree! and one thing i particularly loved about this ...