Hibiscus

This is going to be a fail compared to any other post I've done. I really like this.. I'm kind of speechless.

GODDANGE! Why has everything I've read of yours have to be so good? Why can I relate to it so much? Why does it make me sad? It was wonderful, ...

Imma go cry in a corner, 'cause nobody's commented on it. T-T No all?

First off, cute picture. Secondly, this song makes me wanna go find my puppy and hug hiiim. I liked it. Kind of made me happy and sad at the end.

What the...? Where are people quoting this from? The poem I see is way different! Good, I'll say, but totally didn't have any of those lines in it.

I like! I like!

That was... really goood... can't believe nobody else has commented. I really liked it. It was just kind of beautiful.

So I'm going for a third-times-the-charm try. You slip right through my crinkled, paper fingers. Paper bears the weight, but why do I trust something torn so easily? Still I'm ...

So I'm going to try and take all of your criticism and critique and re-edit my poem to make it... better-er. I don't know how this will go along, but ...

"100 Years of Solitude" by Marquez. Worst book ever written... I'm serious... I hated it, hated reading it, more like trying to force myself to read it. It was just... ...

*Claps* I liked this one... I really did. It's probably my most absolute favorite for you. I have nothing bad to say about it. Good job, chap, good job.

First: Thank you to all for reading the poem and commenting on it. Second: I wrote this on a whim this morning. I actually was on my itouch when I ...