Hermela

I liked this a lot mostly because of how it revolves around the idea of God, which can be explored in several different ways. I felt like you were exploring ...

It' good for a first poem. I think it still needs a lot of work, but it's okay because it's your first poem. Keep it, and keep writing if you ...

I liked it. Good job!

Reading this poem really made me feel peaceful. The beat of the story seemed a little bumpy. I don't know much about poetry, but I did like this. Good job!