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Hello! I shall review for you today, because I'm that awesome! Watch as blood drips from every pore Poor bastard doesn’t know what’s in store My extensive education in English ...

I accidentally read the last line first, and was a little prejudiced when I started reading it, because I was thinking Ew, not another Twilight cliche however, that is just ...

I don't think you should necessarily format your poem into stanzas, as this is free verse, and it can be formatted it any way, so long as it suits your ...

I'm not really sure how to critique this properly, but I just wanted to say that I absolutely loved it, and I don't really know what you mean by: .I ...

Hello there! You asked and you shall receive! I like the idea that you have here, even though people above me said the whole 'Rehab' thing is very overdone. The ...

This is the troll's story of the Three Billy Goats Gruff. I did this as English homework. Please review and be as critical as you like :D The golden sun ...

Hello! I have nothing negative to offer. I absolutely loved it. Every time you wanted to put information in, you didn't actually force it on us, it didn't sound like ...

heyy! I am here to review for you today! I am one of the O’Sullivan’s; a family line filled with werewolves, magic and everything out of the ordinary. Everyone who ...

Well, I noticed that people have already given you very detailed reviews with all the nitpicks anyone could possibly find :P However, you did request a review and a review ...

Am I wrong with assuming that your opening was inspired by a Terry Pratchett novel? :D At first, it didn't make no sense to me, because I didn't understand who ...

Well, all I can say is a job well done! Your poems rhyme well, the way a limerick should rhyme, where lines 1,2, and 5 rhyme and 3,4 together =) ...

Hello! Okay,so I read everything you wrote until now, every single chapter, and I have to say I find it pretty interesting :). You have a good story going there, ...

Haha! I actually liked it! Some if it didn't make sense to me, but that made it even cuter. It's just so fresh and sweet and I just love it! ...

I have no grammar nitpicks to offer, as I'm not that great with them. Although I haven't read the first chapter, from what I read here, I really like it. ...

Okay... Freshmen year ----> Freshman year okay . I got lost alot because my school is huge okay. I got lost a lot because my school was huge. Whenever he ...