HeatherCrawford

I don't know why, but I feel as if the word "endearing" isn't the right word. Make Peter do something, like "hugging her from impulse", or use another word. I ...

Thanks so much, Nike! I feel so honored, as this is my first story (and first comment) on YWS! I've split it up into three parts now, so thanks for ...

Beautiful! I love the scenery, the ocean and the sand and the drawing. And I like this story because it seems like everything is good in it, there is no ...