HeadInTheClouds

Like I said, I honestly think most people that DID like the books liked them because the characters were well drawn, and were identifiable. That's what I think, anyway. But, ...

I know i shouldn't ask the obvious, but : Why are most of you again Eragon it's not thaat bad... It's not so much for me that the writing is ...

So it's. . . . .Not satirical?

the Sight by David Clement-Davies. I doubt many people have heard of it, but it's a great read. If you haven't read it I'd highly recommend it.

*raises hand timidly* The Sea-Wolf and White Fang by Jack London. Some of his best books in my opinion.

Nah, I think at least Song of the Lioness should be on there. I loved that series when I was younger. But yeah, Inheritance shouldn't be on the list. It's ...

Hey vix! Sorry, I can't give you a crit just now, but I will later. I haven't gotten the chance to read much, but it looks good so far.

All of these have been very good aside from a few gramatical errors; bravo! Would you mind PMing me when you post the next bit? I'd really appriciate it.

Anyways, I think Paolini does have a writing talent, but he just needs to fine tune it. A lot of Eldest made me shudder, but there were a few parts ...

I agree with Thriving Fire when he said the Lord of the Rings is an aquired taste. I myself have read it several times, the first time being little more ...

Well, wysteria pretty much covered everything I was going to say. The sea is a beautiful thing, and this gave me a great mental image of it. It's a fantastic ...

Thanks for the critiques from you guys, they were really helpful. As for your question about why I went ahead and told what happened to Trevin, I had wanted to ...

Meh, it was so-so. It didn't flow very well and was quite startling and took a dark turn at the end. It seemed quite happy at first and then BOOM! ...

My thoughts exactly. LOTR is just too hard a read and/or too complex for a lot of readers to understand.

I thought it was quite beautiful. Like a few others have said, I couldn't really find anything wrong with it. Keep up the good work. :wink: