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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Memoirs of Ali - Chapter 2

    Oh, but there was one thing, but it has nothing to do with any mistake of yours: Ali is a boy?! I thought he was a girl! I think of ...

    Nov 22, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Soul Sister Blues Remix, review ASAP, (English Class!)

    Congratulations on your score, Skittles. Now, for the next review. Any edits that I make will be in bold. The sky was the color of Pepto-Bismol that summer evening. I ...

    Oct 5, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Four Roses

    Thank you all!! Especially June and Sophia! Such great reviews - you flatter me very much. ^^

    Jul 15, 2009
  • Script » General, General Re: The Completely Evil Radio Show Script

    YOU played SAURON, Snoink? Oh dear. I'll never think of that guy in the same way again.

    Jul 14, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: My 1st Post

    I'm baack! You wanted me to point out where you were missing commas, so I'll do so. “Fatima I myself am baffled, but we shall know why soon enough.” Comma ...

    Jul 13, 2009
  • Script » General, General Re: The Completely Evil Radio Show Script

    EPIC. Just epic.

    Jul 12, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Rosa never swims with me.

    Eraq! Such a lovely poem! I realy don't have anything to say. ^^ Gold star for you!

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Werefox's Beloved - Prologue

    Hey guys, thanks for all the great reviews. :D Mangusbanefan - Yes, I was having a little trouble with the relationships. I'll definitely try and clear them up a bit. ...

    Jun 3, 2009


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