HavenBuzz

I agree with your points, but I love a good challenge :) and yes, it is a very annoying and inconvenient character flaw, but no body is perfect. :)

Oh and also, the reason Jacob wasn't helping Camilla be quiet, wasn't because he wasn't quiet, but because we stands out because of his height. He can't hide well because ...

Hello! I must thank you for reading my story, and I want to clarify a few things you seemed to be confused about. I'm writing this as a 'fanfiction' because ...

Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed the poem/short story. Also, thanks for the input, I will try to fix the things you talked about. :D

Its my pleasure, and you're welcome. Also, I completely understand. We all have those types of older stories don't we?

I'm glad you liked it :) some of the double spaces/lower cases are probably typos, but I will go through and try and fix as many as possible. Thank you ...

thank you, but I'm sort of confused by 'Work up a little more on grammar part' if it's not too much of a bother, could you give me an example? ...

no problem, But I forgot to mention, I really did enjoy this piece, a lot of the things you mentioned are, though sad, very true. I apologise if my enjoyment ...

thank you! And yes, I do realize its a bit long, I may or may not have gotten a bit carried away. and thank you for letting me know about ...