Haven

Thanks it does, I'm not very good with poetry but the next I have one in mind I hope it wont be to much to ask for your help before ...

Thanks for the commet I'll keep that in mind for next time but the problem is I did this poem a few years ago for school work and didn't notice ...

I loved the intro was nice, nice details, and I love the sudden rush of suspense when she hears knocking on the door. But I want to know who she ...

I loved it!! I just wish that it was a little longer. I thought that the boy was a great effect of the supernatural creepiness was pretty cool. Awesome job!

Thanks I really appreciate your help I'm not very good with poetry so it won't be the last time I make the same mistakes but I'll keep your advice in ...

I thought it was awesome I loved the part where she ruined his face, I mean what an add. Knowing this chapter was good the next one will probably be ...

I wrote this poem because when you've been hurt by someone close to you, someone that you trusted, you just know that in the end they let you go because ...