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Thanks, once again I'm glad you're enjoying Dash :D I thought I should have used "badly" but I wasn't sure. I'll fix that. As for Smirks' space out, that's part ...

You're welcome, and thank you for replying! I'd forgotten the name of this story and forgot to follow you so I couldn't find it again XD Now I can sit ...

Of course, sorry :P My computer's spellcheck is against British-English XD

*whispers* I wrote it too... Like, every other line is mine, including the ending one. :P

Alrighty... here we go :P Thank you for the review. A few things to note... The reason the narrator doesn't say "my father", "my mother", or "my uncle" will be ...

Thanks so much :D Yours was the second review but still, a review is a review :P The narrator's identity will be clarified in future installments, as will other things ...

Thanks! I don't really like to describe my characters all that much, I let the reader imagine them however they want. As this was a bit of a sneak peek/prologue ...

Thanks, I didn't notice the "my" but it's fixed now. I agree that the premise is really strange and I'm surprised that I've done it well enough for people to ...

Yeah, I was kind of leaving the character in solitary confinement, sort of... As for the word tense mix up, I was trying to do something where actions are described ...

Thanks! When the narrator's father was swinging his sword it was blindly due to the home being dark and he was just trying to protect himself, he didn't care for ...

This is for the FOT, isn't it? If so I'm glad that I'm not writing against you! :P I still don't have a story idea and whatever I come up ...

Oh, sorry, I read it as "It's not even worth it being called a noob". Yes, that's cleared things up :P thanks!

This isn't a long review? XD :P

If it's the International Union of Distressed Internal Organs wouldn't they be called IUDIO, not IUDLO?

3-24-2015 Edited work to fix mistakes. Mistakes addressed: -word tense mistakes, switching from past to present -accidentally adding an extra word to a sentence (word wasn't meant to be there) ...