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Hiya, Elinor! I caught your work in the green room and thought I'd drop you a quick review! Gonna focus mainly on grammar-type things because that's my typical jam. I'll ...

Heya, manilla! Getting around to this, now. Too bad it's not in the green room anymore, but a review's a review. I'll dive right into the usual grammar stuff, and ...

Hey, there! Welcome to yewis! I'm here to try and leave a helpful review. I apologize if it comes off too harshly. I typically do grammar-based reviews, which I'll try ...

Heya! Jumping right in-- I turned the knob back and forth in my old minivan, trying to find a radio station with some substance. So by the end of the ...

Hey there! Here for a review. Gonna focus on grammar, as I haven't read any of the previous chapters. The stars were out, the constellations moving slowly across the heavens. ...

Hey there! I do more grammar-based reviews, so I'm just gonna jump right in. The boys, mostly. The pack of boys, wild and scruffy as a wolf pack, The repetition ...

And finally on the fourth chapter! I stood up, leaning in close to hear any footsteps. Surprisingly, someone is coming. Perhaps include a bit crediting Fili for this? Like, “Oh, ...

Heyo! So this chapter shifts to Yusse's POV, nice. I notice that the writing seems much more in his head than it did with Filianna's, which isn't bad. It's somehow ...

Heya. Back again to tackle the next chapter (already). It is now morning; the birds are chirping sweetly and the sky is bright as ever. Personally, I avoid semicolons whenever ...

Hey, Kanome! Popping by for a review! I was gonna try to just focus on content and pacing and whatnot, but grammar hit me and I'm a grammar boi, so-- ...

Hey there! I'm here for a review, and I like to focus on grammar, so let's jump in! It is high time since Tiana has opened her cupboard full of ...

Hey there! I'm going to jump right into things, and I apologize if I come off too harshly. This work feels more like exposition, or notes for a story, than ...

Hey, Adri! I'm liking the whole Fey direction you've been going recently. It's real fun. You know how my reviews go. Grammar here we come! Also, present tense tends to ...

Hiya! Another review from me! *finger guns* I always love reading things from this world, whatever it's called. Let's get started, then! I think you should mention the character's name ...

Hey, Nobunaga! I don't normally review poetry because grammar is subjective to poets, apparently (jokes), and I don't know how to go about critiquing the actual content of poems? But ...