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Re: Goodbye
Thanks for reviewing. Glad you liked it! And I'll work on it to make it better. Thanks for pointing out the problems in this :)
Aug 23, 2014 -
Re: Goodbye
Thanks for reviewing. I knew it had many errors so was hoping for nitpicks to help improve it. I agree with all those that you listed Thanks! Umm this is ...
Aug 23, 2014 -
Re: Goodbye
Thanks for reviewing. I knew it had many errors so was hoping for nitpicks to help improve it. I agree with all those that you listed Thanks! Umm this is ...
Aug 23, 2014 -
Re: The awkward one
hahahh. Hope you have a normal first day. Mine was anything but... :P Thanks for pointing out the punctuation error. My 'real' name is Hassan :) wow. HEHEH... I dont ...
Aug 19, 2014 -
Re: The awkward one
Hi Cricket! That's the problem I almost always face. Most of my "randoms" don't fit in any specific category. Thanks for pointing out the grammatical errors. Really appreciate it. This ...
Aug 19, 2014 -
Re: The awkward one
Hehehhe. Staring at the ground or at my feet is usually the first sign of my awkwardness. :P Thanks!
Aug 19, 2014 -
Re: The awkward one
Thanks for the review!
Aug 19, 2014 -
Re: The price I must pay.
that's like.... what kind of a question is that? :P hehehhe All of them?? ummm I'd go with dear agony, give me a sign, forever, next to nothing and Home ...
Aug 7, 2014 -
Re: The price I must pay.
Waiting for Ben Burnley to start recording again :D
Aug 6, 2014 -
Re: Walls
Wow...just Wow.. This is amazing. Thanks! :D
Aug 6, 2014 -
Re: Walls
Hahha. The thing is, that each of the four lines was supposed to form a stanza. I forget to space it that way while publishing it, and didn't notice the ...
Aug 6, 2014 -
Re: Walls
Thank you! :D Heheh It was my favorite line too! :)
Aug 6, 2014 -
Re: Walls
Thanks! Umm as "walls" was plural, shouldn't it be 'were'? Oh really? :D I don't know what to say. That's the first time anyone has called me a natural poet ...
Aug 6, 2014 -
Re: Walls
Thank you sooo much for the review. When I first started editing this, the lines were really long, and although I did somewhat trim them a bit, I was hesitant ...
Aug 6, 2014 -
Re: Walls
Thanks!! Hope you like my next one as well :D
Aug 6, 2014
