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  • Other » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Goodbye

    Thanks for reviewing. Glad you liked it! And I'll work on it to make it better. Thanks for pointing out the problems in this :)

    Aug 23, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Goodbye

    Thanks for reviewing. I knew it had many errors so was hoping for nitpicks to help improve it. I agree with all those that you listed Thanks! Umm this is ...

    Aug 23, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Goodbye

    Thanks for reviewing. I knew it had many errors so was hoping for nitpicks to help improve it. I agree with all those that you listed Thanks! Umm this is ...

    Aug 23, 2014
  • Other » Other, Humor Re: The awkward one

    hahahh. Hope you have a normal first day. Mine was anything but... :P Thanks for pointing out the punctuation error. My 'real' name is Hassan :) wow. HEHEH... I dont ...

    Aug 19, 2014
  • Other » Other, Humor Re: The awkward one

    Hi Cricket! That's the problem I almost always face. Most of my "randoms" don't fit in any specific category. Thanks for pointing out the grammatical errors. Really appreciate it. This ...

    Aug 19, 2014
  • Other » Other, Humor Re: The awkward one

    Hehehhe. Staring at the ground or at my feet is usually the first sign of my awkwardness. :P Thanks!

    Aug 19, 2014
  • Other » Other, Humor Re: The awkward one

    Thanks for the review!

    Aug 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: The price I must pay.

    that's like.... what kind of a question is that? :P hehehhe All of them?? ummm I'd go with dear agony, give me a sign, forever, next to nothing and Home ...

    Aug 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: The price I must pay.

    Waiting for Ben Burnley to start recording again :D

    Aug 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Walls

    Wow...just Wow.. This is amazing. Thanks! :D

    Aug 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Walls

    Hahha. The thing is, that each of the four lines was supposed to form a stanza. I forget to space it that way while publishing it, and didn't notice the ...

    Aug 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Walls

    Thank you! :D Heheh It was my favorite line too! :)

    Aug 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Walls

    Thanks! Umm as "walls" was plural, shouldn't it be 'were'? Oh really? :D I don't know what to say. That's the first time anyone has called me a natural poet ...

    Aug 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Walls

    Thank you sooo much for the review. When I first started editing this, the lines were really long, and although I did somewhat trim them a bit, I was hesitant ...

    Aug 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Walls

    Thanks!! Hope you like my next one as well :D

    Aug 6, 2014


A classic is a book which people praise and don't read.
— Mark Twain