Harley

I'm not sure they use the word "fit" in America the same way we do, and I've never heard a non-us person say "fine" cool words though- thanks

~update~ We walked to the coffee house, talking about music and stuff. She was a drummer- only for the past couple of months, but she was enjoying it. We walked ...

thanks guys! lol the british sk8er is pretty different to the us one... either that or i know muchachos posers in america, are airwalks sk8er?

4/4, I'm thinking, but I need to revise the tune.. and the lyrics... this needs work

Wow- thanks! I totally get the punctuation thing- I'll change it. One thing; Sarah, you said "This is huge." What do ya mean?

thanks! I'll take the "cute" out of there, and put in "hot" or something. I'm writing about the date just now- i'll keep you posted

It didn't really blow my mind, but it was okay. Not really personal though.

Emma, Scottish slang is really hard for other people to understand, because, frankly, it's hard to see the origins. I mean, how the hell did we get the word "greet" ...

I agree, it's a good poem, but it isn't as good as a song.

It's really cool- amazing lyrics, and really different to what's on mtv these days

Something not working for my life I think this wou;d be better as "sxomething's not working in my life"; to me personally it reads better.

It's nice, the lyrics are cool and i'm sure you'll have a rockin tune.

Yeah, it's okay. Doesn't seem very personal though.

It's pretty cool- i can't wait til you guys get some songs up online.

I agree with Chevy =D>