Hari1998

Hi, Hope you are doing good, I really liked your writing the introductory paragraph is really intriguing and I love the way you described the character.I’m not really a master ...

Hi, It was a really interesting chapter and I couldn’t wait for the next one. I feel like you could have given a bit more of the context to engage ...

Hi, Hope you are doing good. It was a really beautiful story. I really liked the amount of detail you put into the story, it was not too much and ...

Hi, Hope you are doing good. I really loved your story, I loved the way you connect emotionally with the reader. I also liked how you reveal that the protagonist ...

Hi, hope you are doing good. At first glance, I thought this was some kinda cliché gangster story. But you really took a turn deep diving into the characters emotional ...

Hi, Hope you are doing good. I really loved the way you express the feelings, and it was a really nice try. Also there are few spelling mistakes which kind ...