Hannah

Ah! School work! Haha, well, then as long as it fits the criteria for the assignment. ;D

Ahaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. It would have worked better as "umbrella against plainness" instead of "umbrella against the plain", then, and then I think that sentence would work, haha.

I thought it could also be sarcastic, but the rest of the poem speaks so eagerly it's not a very easy logical path to follow. Haha. :)

I completely understand that each word of this hits just the right notes for you to relive and remember and honor the experience you wanted to write about, and that ...

You're welcome! I'm glad I could help! Please, please, please PM me or bother me on my wall if you post another version! :)

Thanks for correcting me! I just brought the language to Google translate and asked it to detect the language for me, so it said Croatian. Sorry about that! Serbian! Also, ...

Love this review!

But did you, in fact, know that I haven't read the books?!?!?!

Did I mention I haven't read the books!? heh heh...

Haha, yeah it would be relevant pretty much anywhere for women, and that's what sucks. I'm glad you feel better after writing it, though!

One dash is actually a hyphen! Two dashes represent an M-dash, the correct punctuation. And although I don't like to follow the rules, the M-dash is supposed to be written ...

I just happened across your poem on the same topic and you really work wonders with language. I hope that you continue bringing your poetic sensibilities into prose, because I ...

Yep. I understood that it wasn't constructed in the regular way. And if you find that it works and goes far for you, and you got something from it, that's ...

:) I was a little familiar with the phrase "juju", but some of the phrasing of the sentence I haven't heard before, like putting "Na" at the beginning, and what ...

No don't hate everything you write, haha. Look at this. I love the words when you have them in a song. xD It totally works with a melody, and with ...