Hannah

This poem tells how easily trust can be broken ^^ I like it. The word flow on some of the stanzas are a little bit, rough. Try picking words with ...

You have a very nice writing style, I might add. With a little added description, and a slightly broader plot, with more attention to detail, I can see this story ...

=D Ahh, I'm so happy! I get to turn this in for class next week, so it's good to get reviews now and have a solid base to build the ...

This song was awesome. I made a kinda heavy melody for it. I think you would have liked it. The emotions you brought were really strong in away. The rhyming ...

To tie up the whole caterpillar thing (which we never found out about, might I remind you) you could mention a butterfly! That would be epically awesome. Her whole transformation ...

=D Yay~ Evi's still here~ I haven't killed her with horrible writing yet! *At this point, Evi tries to restrain herself from breaking her promise to Hannah and rambling about ...

Ah, the joy of a quirky introduction paragraph. Very Happy Kudos to you, my dear. This was enjoyable. Oh, silly, fickle Charlotte, always in denial. Rather than accepting her hopelessness ...

Eeeee, yay, Evi! Haha, I read all of your reviews on each piece before coming back to respond and edit {well, before I plugged in my laptop so I'd feel ...

Hello again, Evi! ^_^ So, this has absolutely sothing to do with the last installment, not to mention nothing to do with caterpillars, pulverized or otherwise. I'm going to have ...

:oops: Yeahh, I found out after I'd flooded that it wasn't such a good idea. I think excitement and eagerness to spend the points I'd saved up sent my good ...

Hallo, Clo! Thanks so much for the review. ^_^ ~ I had been considering changing the first sentence to 'had planned it all out' anyways, so I will definitely do ...

Thanks for the review, Jordan! Eeeps, and sorry, Snoink! For some reason I had this thing in my head from how they rate movies and that they are allowed to ...

this is good, just wheres the punctuation? Besides for the odd period i didn't really see any. besides that, great job. you could really feel the emotion in the words ...

Thanks for reviewing Carly! ^_^ I definitely see what you mean about the awkward transition in the priest's thoughts and how it's not clear that we're talking about the husband ...

Haha, the Mr. Nobody poem was quite entertaining actually. ^_^ ^_^ Alrighty, so here are my suggestions as to what you can do with your requirements! ^_^ Hopefully there is ...