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Hey, Sparkle! This is a pretty tight poem. I don't see any glaring problems with meter or rhyme. The words are simple enough and the rhyme scheme loose enough that ...

Hey there! I usually don't like rhyming poems, but you know what? You're good at it, so it works for this poem, keeps the rhythm flowing, and makes me swallow ...

It was all smooth sailing up until this point: My stepmom turns to me . “Would you like me to drive you?” s he chirps happily, turning off the TV ...

Solvy, let's see if I can help: The compelling sound of a trot was wayfaring through the pastureland as Andre's body bounced on the saddle. Are you purposefully distant from ...

Is this a really important moment? Like, I'm thinking on it, and all I get from this animal (which, by the way, I wasn't sure it was at first: first ...

Okay. Making a statement at the top. You have gotten a lot of attention and help from the people on YWS on your many poems. I've reviewed at least two ...

Okay! I am tempted, honestly, to just link you to a bunch of grammar articles and make you proof-read and correct your work before I come back to say anything ...

Gee, Solvy! A lot of this is very powerful, and that's awesome! But you had me screaming noooooo when you wrote this: Rend my heart! For no one will accept ...

Alllirghty~ This looks like it'll be interesting! haha I'mma go through once and leave comments as I go! “Don't judge us by the paleness of our skin or the size ...

I agree with my fellow Knight, my friend. But first I want to welcome you, encourage you to explore all that YWS has to offer, and perhaps leave some reviews ...

Hey there. Here are my main thoughts about this poem. I like the epic space you've chosen for the story of this occurrence. It works effectively as a backdrop to ...

I am here, my knight, as requested! My shaking fingers led themselves into my pocket, That's silly. They did not do that. Don't give life to random parts of your ...

Oh, romantic poems are really hard. I applaud you for attempting it, and I celebrate whatever motivation came behind it, because love is divine, isn't it? Haha. The problem is ...

Well. Okay, if you enter the website with this, I am so darn excited to see you stay here and post more things for me to be pleased by. This ...

Oof! It's not that bad. I'm glad you're enthusiastic about submitting and even more glad to see you've already helped someone out with your own review. So here are my ...