Hannah

Okay, sure. You want a bit of sensation here. I understand the impulse and inspiration, but let's take a closer look here. First of all, if you're going to present ...

Hey there, Ayumi! I'm a little baffled as to why this hasn't received more reviews. I think the first thing that really struck me that I like about this piece ...

Okay! Hey, Scarli. So at the beginning, I was really pleased with the character and situation you were dreaming up. I mean, lots of time a well-meaning person will ask ...

Hey, Fizz! Thanks for posting your work. I really really appreciate the introspective quality of what you're doing. I'm the kind of person who likes to think about basically everything, ...

Aghams. Hey, there Cowbby. Here to save your work from the clutches Green Room like any good Green Room Knight would do! So, the first time I glanced in here, ...

Hey love. I like that there's a lot of power in this short piece. It hits pretty hard for so few words. I don't know if this is based in ...

A couple more quick nitpicks in addition to the "meat" one that Knight Teen pointed out: he changed his skin and enter ed the bodies of those imagined men His ...

Hey there, GlitterGabbi! I'm here to make up for the Secret Santa reviews you didn't get on Christmas in July. D: Sorry about that, but I'm a helper elf here ...

I'm here once again for your second make-up review! So let's get to it, shall we? Here are some comments I have as I read through once: I realized my ...

Hey, PumpkinCat! I am here to make up for the Secret Santa reviews you never officially received. ;_; I'm sorry you got stuck with a Santa Deadbeat, but! I am ...

Hey, Tronks! I'm here after also reading chapters one and two, so I'm kind of rolling all of my feedback so far into one review. Hopefully it will be helpful ...

Hey, Persy. I love you. I love especially the contrast in the first stanza, and the way the last part feels broken off completely from the rest. The idea of ...

Ohhh yay! Girl power! Haha. You are pretty much a master at choosing where to end your chapters at. This is another awesome cliff hanger: we want to know if ...

Woo woo~ Hannah train coming through! Though he's twisted, practically insane, and was a real pain in the ass for me, but he was still the best student Tracey and ...

Hey, Shady! Ack~ So, I didn't even know what a Lanturne was before this thread. I quickly looked it up and found that the first and last lines are supposed ...