Hannah

Ooh, I'm back to hit up another of your poems, love! Hope you remember me from the last one. So, I like again your choice of imagery here. Again, you ...

Hey there, Morticiansdaughter19! I'm Knight Hannah from the Knights of the Green Room, and I'm here to review your poem for Review Day! How exciting, right? If you're interested in ...

Hey there! The first thing that caught my eye: “Oh, nothing.” I said, chuckling. “You’re just so cute when you do that.” I added in a friendly, mocking manner, clasping ...

Hey, Knight Manisha! This is one of the three reviews you'll be rewarded for entering our honorable contest. Good luck earning the Scribe Badge! Also, make sure you stop by ...

Hey there, wildwildcat. Here to review on behalf of the Knights of the Green Room, since you submitted to the contest. The first thing I want to say, though, is ...

Hmm, I may not have been engaged with the sword fight, but bringing up several potential threads for future stories in the Day faerie and healing wings was a nice ...

Aha! So! The main problem I have with this is that the entire previous chapter set me up for something that was supposed to be exciting and fantastic, and you ...

So, one of the first thoughts I have as I read through this third chapter is I would love to see evidence of these character watching the other characters. Maybe ...

Oh! Looks like you really need to check out this article for this chapter: “Welcome back . ” Fiera said, nodding at me. “Hello to you too . ” I ...

Hey, Knight Dragon! I'm dropping by the first chapter with just a couple grammar errors to point out. That’s ugly, worse than silver. This is a comma splice! You can ...

Hey there! First of all, a warm welcome to you! I hope you find lots of help, friends, and memories here on YWS, and maybe this will be the first ...

Hello, authors! You know what's interesting is that I recently watched "Loose Change", a documentary that explained why 9/11 was not what it appeared to be to the majority of ...

Hey there, my friend! I am here with one of the three promised reviews for your entry in the KotGR contest! Hopefully I can be useful to you~ I'm really ...

Fortis the Fortieth Knight, I am here to review you with honor in the name of our company, the Knights of the Green Room~ Thank you for submitting your work ...

Hey, Elinor! Here to represent our lovely Knights with a review for your entry in the contest. So here's what I have for you. Keep in mind I'm going to ...