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Woah, and suddenly I feel like I am in a completely different story! o_o Here is the biggest suggestion I think could benefit this chapter: Find more unique ways to ...

Oh, lovely! Hey, Alvarin. I'm here, starting on chapter one so I can eventually get you some more useful notes on chapter two, which is stuck in the Green Room ...

Hey there, Leigh! So, first I do want to say congratulations on having the courage to write and post something that is of a different topic and style than most ...

Hey, verymaryanna! Thanks for sharing your poetry with us~ The first thing I noticed was you wrote "envelope" instead of "envelop"! envelope is a noun: "a flat paper container with ...

Oh, I like it! I am really digging happy, friendly poems these days, I guess. I like especially how you used cliched phrases to bring lightness to the poem. It's ...

I'm baaaaack~ It was as if every festival in the world had been mashed together in one place. Okay, oh no~ This is lazy and you can do way better ...

Hey there~ Back for more 'cause I can't keep away haha. but the accountant never arrived at the real reason why: Conrad annoyed him on purpose. I don't think you ...

I'm here again~ “Figured they might be important. And I thought you might like this, too.” The balloon-artist procured a green balloon from his waistcoat, and faster than a blink ...

Alrighty, I'll bite on your challenge and see how far I get. Hopefully I will be of some help to you! First thoughts on first read through: Newcomers, if they ...

Ooh. So my first feeling about this when reading through was this was the entrance into a relationship after having gone through previous relationship abuse, or abuse by a family ...

Hey there, Hecate! Thanks for bringing your work on over. Hmm. Here are my reactions after reading it over once: At first, I loved the contrast and conflict between the ...

Woah! This is pretty intense, moment. It's been a long time since I read a piece of writing that went this deep into a single moment in time, and I ...

Hey, Sureal! Long time no see~ Let's see what I can dig up in here. (: The first thing I noticed was this: It did not become a doctor to ...

Hey, astutedude! I think we've tangled in the reviewing ring a couple of times before, so I've stopped by to see if I can be of any help this time. ...

I always kind of hate happening across things that I don't know if they are a result of weird formatting or actually intentional, because what I liked most about this ...