Hannah

Your breath blew through your lips like the crisp autumn breeze and I was left alone. This poem is solid and surprising up to this poem. I loved the concrete ...

Hmm. I'm puzzling and puzzling but I can't figure out what the speaker is supposed to be. They have a black scar, blemishes, are always watching a wall -- its ...

Nooo. ;_; Ah, the pain of losing an animal companion is so bad, especially when you grew up with them, when they supported you through hard times in your life. ...

Hmm. Okay, I know that surprises are good and fun and interesting when you don't see them coming, but I think this poem was too vague to try to guess ...

Hmm, hey Zhia! Was this for an assignment? Did you have a form you had to stick to or somethin' like that? I'm going to review it as if it's ...

Oh, a nice acrostic! I think it's pretty solid, and I don't want to destroy it. Generally, I think of acrostics as poems you write in school just to practice ...

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. Fortis, this is absolutely amazingly GORGEOUS. Haha, I love so much love love all the concrete imagery and the well-defined personality of the main character in this poem.

Hey there, Weymouth! Thanks for sharing your writing with us. The thing that first struck me was that I liked ending the poem on a real concrete image that had ...

Hey, lovely rival. Decided to take a break from working toward defeating sad monkey and get to your request. (: So, what was interesting to me about this piece was ...

Hey, Dude McGuy! Have we run into one another before? In any case, I'm here now with the intention to read through all the chapters you have up so far ...

Okay, let's see how the second part feels compared to the first! The spouts of unconsciousness gradually grow less and less as with each day the nurses remove the sheets ...

Hey, Midnightrose! Thanks for sharing. Here's a nitpick I caught on my first read-through: The jokes that us alone shared. "us" is the word used as an object. So for ...

Hey, Blackwood! I know I started reading the longer companion to this a while ago, and though I haven't finished it yet, I figured I'd stop by for this shorter ...

Hey, WillowPaw! This seems like a pretty exciting and fun school assignment. Is it for a poetry class or a science class or what? :) Okay, so the point of ...

Hey, yo, hey, yo! Like JohnLocke, I am here to rescue this piece from the lack of reviews it's received in the name of the Knights of the Green Room. ...