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Oh man, that last stanza makes it all worth it, doesn't it? fortis, do you think you could live with a poem if it looked like this? We watch the ...

Hey there, race opponent~ I hope to see you out here on review day gettin' some reviews racked up against me, and get working toward your new NEW star! So, ...

The ending is the shining pearl of this poem -- that is a darn awesome ending, okay!? I think it's awesome because it's a strong image, and probably like a ...

Hmm! I like this style, first of all. I like the set up of the question and the answer -- I love too that the question itself is so loaded! ...

Aley, HIIIIIIIIII. First of all, I want to say that I love the tone of voice here. I love the "I don't mean", because it shows the voice speaking directly ...

Yo, miss Audy. Two poems of yours in a row, eh!? I like that I don't notice the rhyme until the italics. I like that because you start off on ...

Hmm! Okay, I love Quidditch. I love the idea of it, and I'm a fan of Harry Potter, so that's not the problem here... I'm wondering first why you wanted ...

I think there are a lot of pieces of this poem where I am missing the feelings, the exact meanings, but I got enough of it to feel something. I ...

Hey there, SereneSimpliciT! I am first of all impressed with the consistency of the relative consistency of the meter in this poem, even with such short lines. Four syllables in ...

Hi there, Em101cats! I generally like poems written about news articles or pieces of history. I love that poetry has the power to take an event and let us feel ...

SO NICE SO NICE OH MY GOD MAGPIE WHAT IS THIS. I am dying with the perfectness that is this poem. How long did you work on this, or did ...

You definitely have an awesomely strong image to open this poem with. I love the idea of the cage up on the balcony -- how you described the gold and ...

Hello, hello, mimimac! When I first started reading this poem, I was overcome with the desire to sing it aloud to some random, chill rhythm, and so I did. That's ...

Hey, Deanie. I liked watching the progression of thought throughout this poem. I liked seeing the poem move from looking at the problem as if it were the problem of ...

Audy! I'm jumping right in because I can't resist a title as luscious as "goose country". and our mothers too, molted. we saw the shine gone from their eyes. No ...