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Hi, there! If you want to get more reviews more quickly, I'd suggest breaking longer sections of writing like this into two parts, so people can review on the two ...

I find it a little bit hard to believe that this evil guy would lie so boldly in the face of people and that they wouldn't believe him -- why ...

Ooh! Lucky me! I'm here for another chapter, and luckily it's with a new character so I can get a fresh start without worrying about the other chapters I've kind ...

Hey, Alvarin! It's been a while. I have to admit up front I kind of forgot what happened in chapter three, but luckily it's pretty clear in this chapter that ...

Hey again, Isha! Sorry to kind of pop in again without having read the other chapters. I should, I know, because I like the little snippets I've seen on review ...

Hey again, Gravity! Looks like I get to see a bit more of you on this lovely review day. So, I hear this is a story you wrote a while ...

BAM, back for three, and I am liking this one as well. The very first thought I had is that I don't think polygamy is the right word -- that ...

Haha, back so soon?, you ask. Seems like you posted a few poems on free work day and that means I'll get to know you a bit better through them. ...

Hey, Baesch! Lovely to see that you are now able to publish works and even lovelier that now I'll get to review one. This seems like a pretty simple, shallow ...

AHHHHHHHHHHH twist ending! Haha, I completely didn't expect it! That also means that the whole time I was thinking "hey, a real therapist would never say this kind of stuff, ...

Ack. It's a very sad feeling to write about, and it really leaves us at the end with this feeling of hopelessness and also nostalgia. You write about the same ...

Hey there, love. Never happened across poetry of yours as far as I can remember, so this is a nice treat. It feels clear to me from reading this that ...

Hey there, Percybeth! I want to say that I like the instinct you show in phrases like "cows painted black and white" -- you don't just give the easy image, ...

It feels like it's been a long time since I read a poem as subtle, genuine, and layered as this poem is. At first I thought it was about one ...

Haha, I remember when you promised us a peaceful moment and then suddenly everything got dramatic again. It seems that these past two chapters have been more peaceful and quiet ...