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Oh. My goodness. So I'm not a big fan of the fact that I have to see the same scene of walking through the machines one more time, even if ...

Back again! I am so tickled and pleased by the fact that there were stairs in the darkness and this boy is somehow secretly bragging about being brave enough to ...

Heya, Fortis! So, I read past the first line in order to ground my first impressions in more context, but I do still want to talk about it. The summer ...

Persy, It would be easy to say the same as the other two reviewers have, and to be honest, that was my first instinct as well. It didn't seem to ...

Uh, YEAH! What happens next?! If you can get the reader to say that after reading a part of your story, you've got a really good thing happening. It also ...

Marmalade, I immediately get and relate to the first and third stanzas. They are simply presented, but portray the situation without straight out saying "We're going to be apart in ...

First of all, I was going to go review a piece of poetry instead since I'm reviewing in between lesson planning, but that first sentence pulled me in and wouldn't ...

Alliyah, I really enjoy this poem. I have a soft spot for poems with narrative woven in, so the story and the characters I feel in this piece draw me ...

Hey there! Thanks for sharing this small teaser with YWS. First of all, I really like how subtle the character's name is while still alluding to the source material. When ...

Hi, Dutiful! On recommendation, I hopped over here to check it out, and found a few things to share with you that may hopefully help during editing! :) The first ...

I don't quite understand why you are considering making the second line have 8 syllables. What does the word "the" add to the poem that you think is currently missing? ...

Hi, again. First of all, I wanna commend you on the practice of writing summaries. Getting reviews even on these small ideas can really help you build ideas, think of ...

Hi, Soulfulwriter. Thanks for sharing this summary with us! I'll give you my thoughts on it as a 25 year old. If this is intended for younger readers, their thoughts ...

Hi, Anne, What an intriguing concept. I know I've always found a little interest in knowing the "meaning" of flowers or even the particular color of flowers, so I feel ...

Hey, Alice! I am here for just a few quick thoughts, haha. Lanturnes can't really take much more than that, can they? For me, the grammatical errors in the first ...