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Hi, Jenni. I like the idea of using the colors in this poem, and I like that you didn't just go with 'omg, red means love now there's red so ...

First of all, I'm sorry for like jumping on all of your submissions. I read your earlier one as well, though I forget if I critiqued it or not. Anyways, ...

Why did you post this? It doesn't say anything about the story, and if it does, we don't know it because it's not connected to anything. Since this is a ...

Hey, Kylan! This is beautiful. It is hard to find phrases that don't sit right, but there are a few that I want to point out to you. rising warm ...

This is really pretty nice, and it's pretty well done, as well. I'm not going to go through every little piece because I'm about to get to bed, but here's ...

Hey, man. Well, I didn't really like this. And the problem is that I didn't like it in form or in content, so I'm going to address both of those ...

Please read the following articles and edit your work accordingly. Though punctuation isn't the deciding factor as to whether a piece is good or not, it makes it a lot ...

Hello, Aristotle! So, this a nice little piece. It's silly, so there's not much to review concerning the message, but I still think you could fix it up a little ...

Hey, Kitkat! First, before you do anything else, click on the dancing pink elephant and learn how to punctuate dialogue. No, seriously. Click on it. :elephant: Secondly, I want to ...

First of all, if you want to break up, do it. I know it's not place for relationship advice, but if you honestly don't want to be with someone, it ...

Hello! How often have you written poetry? Let's see if we can't get you into a different style. First of all, I'm going to challenge you to write a poetry ...

Hey, I have a few bits to mention on your couplets. :3 1) The sun has risen, it is now dawn, the moon is playing as the morning's pawn. I ...

Hello, Kamas. You say you're not good at poetry and I think that's a load of feathers! -angry glare- Here's the feeling that I have after reading through this a ...

Do you live for the summer? I remember some of your summer poetry from last year, Kylan, and you SHINE here. I believe that last year I also cautioned us ...

Haha, because as much as people hate to admit it, we form intense connections with one another and can adapt to pain or disappointment as long as it gets us ...