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Re: Women, Their Beauty
I really like this poem. I have always loved disney stories, but i prefer the grimm brothers versions. However I feel that this is left rather unfinished. There doesn't really ...
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Re: Conditional Concern
I love this. Though simple you have packed so much feeling unto such a short poem. I feel that you have based this off of own personal feelings, if my ...
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Re: Broken Beer Bottles
Hey Hanna here! I like this short story. You did a nice job. However I feel that the characters could use a bit more development. such as giving a little ...
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Re: Vernon
wow I am left almost to tears... I love this so much. It reminds me of the time when my mother died. It was raining the day she died too. ...
Dec 7, 2018 -
Re: how do you poem?
Hey there! I like this, mainly because i can totally relate. I really like the simplicity of the work and the way you used the metaphors to add to your ...
Dec 7, 2018 -
Re: Never Forget
I Really like this poem, however the part in the beginning is a bit confusing to me. I understand all of it, it just sounds awkward when you read it ...
Dec 7, 2018 -
Re: Trigger
I am left breathless I love this poem. I too was a victim of sexual abuse so I understand. my childhood sucked, so if you ever need someone to talk ...
Dec 6, 2018
