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Hi csr121295 Thank youso much for your review and the points you made. I'm glad you liked it and I am going to work on it a bit more to ...

Hi EternalRain, Thanks for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I might make it longer and expand on it in the near future, if I do I'll be sure ...

Hey Cleverclogs! Thanks for your time and all your help I'll be sure to take them into consideration and remember them when I'm writing again. Yes, she took off her ...

Hey Flite, Thank you very much for taking the time to review my writing. I hope that you haven't misunderstood the piece. I am aware that it is quite controversial ...

Hi Eros, Thank you so much for your feedback. I hadn't thought about writing the rest of it but I'll definitely think about it now that you've brought it up ...

Oh yeah sorry I see what you mean about countries :)

Thank you MS! I'll add some more description in as soon as possible I had just completely forgotten about that when I was writing it :) glad you like it ...

Thanks for your feedback RP! I've already had a couple of people telling me to add more description so I'm going to try adding some in when I can. Again, ...

Hey Purple, thanks for taking the time to review :) I understand where you're coming from so do you think I should add a little paragraph before the scene introducing ...

Thanks for your feedback! Glad you enjoyed it :)

Hey Kanome! Thanks for the review! I'll think about the actions and add some in :) about countries I'm pretty sure that's how its spelled.. How do you think it ...

Ooooooh ok I get it :)

I can tell :p

Haha! Ok :')