Hailey_Ann

Hello!! Okay, for you, one word--wow... I REALLY like this piece! You had great wording and from the first sentence, the poem draws me in! I'm so jealous i didn't ...

Hello there! Yes, indeed, I agree with Springrain, this poem does indeed feel as if it's a rough draft-- a rough draft with great potential!! Firstly, you had great imagery ...

Hello there!! I read this poem on a review that you left, and I must say, it caught my attention, which is good for a poem. I really liked this ...

Hello there!! Okay, this was a good poem, but I must say, It made me a little uncomfortable. But, that just might be because of the subject of this poem. ...

Hey there! Lovely poem! I really liked how you put your feelings at the end of each stanza. I can understand why you liked this poem. I didn't think that ...

Hello! Okay, firstly: One thing I didn't like about this poem was the fact that you told us it was about you. I think maybe the reader should be able ...

Hello!! Your poem was wonderful! I really enjoyed it and felt the simmering emotions. One thing I should suggest though (As said above), Is maybe to mask the poem. I'm ...

Hello!! I liked your poem, it held very much emotion, and that's usually good In a poem! But, the end seemed a little vague, and you did kind of repeat ...

Hello!! Your poem was great! I can really relate! School Is really tough, and you kind of threw that out there In you poem. I LOVED the wording and the ...

Hello darling, Wow, okay, i typically liked this poem. Obviously, it was written from real feelings, unlike many love poems that were just thrown together. I like straight-forwardness, and this ...

WOW... I'm speechless. That poem was absolutely wonderful. It was very intriguing! The wording was wonderful and as soon as i began reading, the imagery began. You seem like you ...

Hello! Wow. I found this poem really intriguing. It was short and straight to the point. I liked It a lot. But one thing I think maybe you should do ...

Hello! I really enjoyed this poem as well. It was very simple, but also didn't beat around the bush. You put your feelings out there and let it be. The ...

Hey! I really enjoyed your poem. No, it didn't rhyme, but who cares, it was still a great poem. I can relate to you to a certain extent. You did ...

Hey!!! Okay, truthfully, i didn't particularly like some of the rhymes in this poem. Some of your wording choices weren't very good, but maybe that's because you were trying to ...