Hadj

Thanks for the review, and again, welcome to YWS! I'm glad you liked "slowly slowing", everyone else complained ;) And yes, the lack of punctuation was on purpose. I'm just ...

"How long does it take for you to write a poem like this?" This one took me 11 minutes "Also the semicolon doesn't 100% need to be there. You could ...

Italics because its the thoughts of the speaker as he takes the test, thanks for the review :)

Thanks for the nitpick, and for all of these reviews :)

Its fine, in the future, just do it for the first stanza though ;)

Thanks for the review, but you're not exactly supposed to quote the whole poem (seen as a cheap way of getting points). Just keep that in mind for the future, ...

Haha thanks, this was my first one on YWS :)

It has 1 like :)

Were any of my theories correct?

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A player piano is a piano that plays music automatically, the speaker bought a player piano to play the music of their lost loved one.

Thanks for the review! I'm going to bed and then vacation... I'll review your poem in a week! :P

Thanks for the review ^.^

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Thanks so much and welcome to YWS!