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Re: vengeance (chapter six)
Again, diving right in! :D My conversations with them were often interrupted by Dean, who told me that George, who was somehow the Chi of both twins, had the opposite ...
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Re: vengeance (chapter five)
Alright, let's just dive right into it! What happened next was fairly anticlimactic. Two boys, identical down to the very cloths and weapons they carried, stepped from the foliage calmly. ...
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Re: vengeance (chapter four)
Hello again 'ol buddy, 'ol pal! Looks like another interesting installment you've got here, and it brought me more action, and hopefully more points (since I've been feelin' out of ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Hi, I'm agnostic.
This is an interesting poem here. I don't see this perspective too much in the writing I've discovered in my life, so this is definitely something new for me. Let's ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Lost Carnage I
Where do I begin? Hmmm, how about...THIS STORY IS FREAKIN INTENSE! I enjoyed reading it, and now I'm ready to offer my critiques. Hopefully this review is as action-packed as ...
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Re: Shout it to the World.
Well look at that! Now that's a very relatable, sweet poem you've written there :D I like it a lot, and I think you have a very nice story and ...
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Re: Fighting For The Words
Love love love love love! This poem is so adorable and sweet! I absolutely love it :D Alright, I suppose you want some details now, haha, so here you go... ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: 0
Ooooh, chills! I really really really like this poem here. It could do withough the double-spacing, but I can get past that. This really exemplifies the torturous darkness that comes ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Atlas
Let me first say I'm a huge fan of the Percy Jackson books. They're creative, hilarious, well-written, and have great characters. I think this poem is a good tribute to ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Influenza
*In spirit and admiration of how amazing this story is, I will review it without the use of any "The's,' beginning now! :D* I think this is a very interesting ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: When We Were Younger
Short, sweet, simple, and with a great message! I like this poem a lot. It makes me very nostalgic thinking about these vivid images you've put in here. I used ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Sons of Mars
Hi there DramaLlama! I really liked this story quite a lot. The imagery was good, the character building was superb, and I really love that last line! This story kind ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Stars in the fallen sky
This is a very deep and inspirational poem. I can just see the image now, a nighttime sky filled with stars all streaking gold across the deep blue. Ooooh, chills! ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Winterland.
Please please please please PLEASE don't just let this die! This is far too amazing to let go! As you can see by the multitude of reviews you've gotten here! ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: [Post Deleted]
Call me the biggest fool of them all, because I absolutely love this poem you're written here! I've found quite a few Christian poems today, so I'm happy, and this ...
May 4, 2011
