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Re: Ember's Glow: Chapter 1
Hi! This was a very interesting chapter but first of all, what is a Grenlu? It's very intriguing but I would either specify it now-when you first mention it, or ...
Apr 28, 2016 -
Re: Sakura Rain
Hello, Gymnast2801 here! This was a very touching poem and I really liked it. Umm...I don't think I really have anything negative to say about this poem. It's very well ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: Wolf and Aristocrat: Chapter One
Hello. This story is very intriguing! I also loved how you made the first sentence so intriguing, that was smart. I only have one question: Is Wolf a real wolf ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: The Elfling - Prologue
Hi! Wow, this was a wonderful prologue!! It's very intreguing because the reader wants to know why these earthquakes are happening, who/what is causing them, why this city is set ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: The Hanging Tree
Hi! I'm Gymnast2801 and I'm going to write a review. I love this poem-and I also love how creative you where by creating something new from something that has already ...
Apr 27, 2016
