GwendolenGodsmack

I really liked this poem. There was alot of emotion thick inside of it, and I could feel the gulrt and fear rising off you. My particular favorite stanza was: ...

I liked this poem for the emotion, but try not to repeat words. Often in a poem or a work of fiction you use repetition as a literary device, but ...

It seems like this poem was more suited to being IN your book rather than by itself. If you have to explain about it like you did, than you probably ...