GryphonFledgling

Wow. This was extremely powerful. I wasn't quite sure what his 'fiction' was in the beginning: whether it was a book or a movie or something. Then when you mentioned ...

I'll write a disclaimer right now that I myself am not much of a poetry writer and certainly not a critic, but I do like to say what I like ...

I dunno about the critique that Via gave. I'll admit right now that I am not much of a poetry critic, but I liked the places that the lines were ...

This was quite beautiful, with its stark simplicity. I liked it, but I do agree that the last line threw off the balance. It was still a nice poem with ...

*mouth hangs open* This was so gorgeous. I really have nothing to critique, and anything I could have dragged up with a nit comb, Mat beat me in mentioning. Your ...

Wow, this was beautiful. It flowed like a poem. Lovely. My one question is how a sound can crash across the sky. It is a great image, but I don't ...

Omigosh! This was so powerful. I loved the entire thing and have nothing to say by way of critique. Seriously, this was so beautiful. My favorite image was "a scarred ...

I liked them. I didn't really understand the first stanza of your poem, however. Wouldn't you want to talk more, so that you would make more? And how does it ...

Well, aithalos said pretty much what I wanted to say, so i am left behind there, but I do have a couple more. First of all, it just seems rather ...

The funny thing about my reading this poem is that I like the night. I like the mystery of it. Sir Wozzel I think did a masterful job of critiquing ...

Hehe, this was great. It's been a long time since I've seen a limerick. I guess they don't pop up much in my daily life. My only problem with it ...

'plauge' = 'plague' 'peak' = 'peek' (in this instance) (Is this part 2? I can't tell. Numbers might be nice... :)) These are really short entries. Did you ever consider ...

This was beautiful. But did you consider adding in some more mundane descriptions. Describe the way how the sand grains that the wind blows down sparkle like tiny diamonds and ...

The present tense in this story is cool. You don't see many works like this because the present tense is sometimes distracting, but this is pretty good. my heart pounding ...

Everyone else has spoken their piece on critique, so I won't repeat what they are saying. I'll just go with the warm, fuzzy feeling that praise brings. I'll admit that ...