GryphonFledgling

Ooh, very very nice. I loved the use of various mediums for the messages, rather than them all being the same. One thing that I would do (really my only ...

Epic win, my friend. Epic win. My favorite part was Edward scintillating. I started laughing at that point and didn't stop. Two other moments of distinction: The black hole falling ...

*gapes* Omigosh, I am reduced to gibbering nonsense. Seriously, this review has no substance at all by way of critique (I hate writing reviews like this) but I had to ...

Well, hello there. Thanks a lot for the PM! More Leland! Yay! Beware, however. I am feeling wordy today, so this may be one heck of a long review. ...Leland ...

Ah, Jared, as magnificent as always. I continue to be impressed by you. I must say, Steve's character here reminded me a little of Rorschach from "Watchmen" (though, having just ...

i]get[/i] this way? Tee hee... Talk about a nitpick, but you might want to fix that italics in there. It needs the closing bracket. Hmmm... This was interesting. For the ...

O.O (like you haven't seen enough of those faces yet) This was... I don't know how to describe it. Beautiful and disturbing and sick and inspiring and... just... I don't ...

Ooh, I'm interested. I loved the simple effectiveness of your writing and the level of description you bring in without actually stopping to describe things. I dunno, I just felt ...

Nice. I like the characterization that the last few ones have demonstrated in contrast to the first. However, this sort of felt out of character for Roger in comparison to ...

First of all, wow. This was incredible. I am looking forward to part two with great excitement. Seriously, this blew me away. Your characters and your writing were strong and ...

Yeah, the whole kidnapping thing seemed really sudden. Also, why did Alessandro both to go through the trouble of kidnapping her, when he could just show up at her house? ...

Hmm, it seems that my theory that I went out on a limb with would be correct. Quite the interesting twist, that. Nitpick of the day: I'd write out the ...

"Well, some guys have already asked me and I was going to go with Derrick. I'm sorry." I don't know why, but this sounds a little arrogant, almost like she's ...

Omigosh! No! My eyes! Pleeeeeease do something about that first sentence and the waking up to the alarm clock and banging a hand down on it and all of that. ...

Meh, two things I am worried about: 1) Vampires. Period. (You say that the only vampire novel you ever read would be "Twilight". Unfortuately, rather than making you less likely ...