GryphonFledgling

I'm feeling a re-telling of a fairy tale, am I? Something like "Snow White", amirite? Nah, I could totally be wrong, but this is really what I'm feeling. Is this ...

Omigosh, but this is friggin' amazing. Seriously gory and really disturbing, but yet it draws me in marvelously. Really the only thing I could find new to comment on: harsh ...

*blink* Wow. This was good. I'll admit I was expecting some angsty story from the first few lines, but this actually turned out really good. I cared about the woman ...

Yup yup yup, I feel your pain. I actually just wrote my own drivel about fighting with my "headvoice". (Speaking of which, that has got to be the best name ...

Well, hello again! Of course I remember you and I am more than happy to leave you a review! It seems as though everyone else has nitpicked this quite a ...

Omigoodness, it's over. :( Okieday, certainly a smash-bang finale. The intensity in this one just did not stop. Very very nice. Yay for gratuitous blood and fire! It felt like ...

Finally! For some reason, it took me forever to find this after spending the entire month of November waiting for you to post it somewhere and then sort of forgetting ...

Ooh, very nice. I loved the relationship between the two characters. Seriously. The whole "Twilight"-bashing thing is getting a little old for me (even though I don't like "Twilight") and ...

The whole situation made me grin. Poor guy, picked up because of a misunderstanding. But let it be a lesson to him: always turn in random envelopes of money found ...

Well, hello there and welcome to YWS! I'm GryphonFledgling and I'll be your reviewer today! A couple things right off the bat: 1) You're 13? *oogles* Your writing is so ...

Wow. This is amazing. If you've read the other chapter one, can I ask you to forget it and pretend that this is the official chapter one? Because it is, ...

Well, 'allo, 'allo there! Sorry it took me so long to finally work around to leaving you a review. Wow, this was suspenseful. When the blood started leaking through the ...

*squee* I gots a promo! I'm famous! Ahem, yes, well... I can see where people are coming from when they say these things are hard to critique. I'm a little ...

Meh, I can't say as I liked it as much as the first one, but you did say it was your least favorite... A lot of the difference was in ...

Ooh! Hades and Persephone! Only one of my favorite Greek myths evah! Must read... *zombie stare* *ahem* Anyway, quite the lovely piece of work, I must say. I've always loved ...