GryphonFledgling

This is beautiful! The prose is really thick and meaty and I think if you tried to write an entire novel exactly like this, it might be too much, but ...

*pokes* Shiny. Hello, this would be GryphonFledgling and I am here to review this Collaboration of the Century. I come prepared to be dazzled. *has high expectations* Not more than ...

Wow, this was good. It was funny too, in a dark way. Very nice. The mindreading was done very subtly. It can too easily be made cheesy, but you worked ...

Hello there! I'm GryphonFledgling and I'll be your reviewer today! This was well-written and pretty solid grammatically, but it felt a little description heavy. There's very little action and a ...

'Allo, 'allo, what have we here? I must say. Thirilight's rambling as he was dying were quite funny. I liked the little snippets of thought. A thought on that though, ...

I actually didn't read this book until last year. It is my friend's favorite book and she kept pestering me to read it, while I invented excuse after excuse. I ...

Ooh, a genre-savvy heroine. Those don't happen too often. I wasn't too clear on the reasoning behind why Gerry was the "true love". How exactly did that work out? I ...

This piece... confused me. In the beginning dream, there is suddenly a man out of nowhere. Then there's weird faces in the mirror, then a revelation that isn't really a ...

There is a Magic to nature that will never be explained by science. Any particular reason why "Magic" is capitalized. I don't really see a reason for it, as it ...

This was interesting. I liked the beginning set up. The end seemed a little weird, considering how it sort of just cuts off after all that set up we read ...

This was really pretty, but confusing. I didn't really catch most of the meaning you intended, though I did read through the thing in a rather happy haze. It is ...

I must say, this was one of the funnier Twilight-bashing stories I've seen. Nate totally is a fangirl magnet. At least he exists. And he brought us YWS! Nate: 2 ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS! Whoa, talk about throwing us into the action immediately. It's a nice hook, but the problem is that we don't know anything about these characters, ...

This was sweet. I liked it. My biggest critique would be on the mother: she comes across so much like a stereotypical witch. I mean, you have her cackling at ...

I loved the menthol paste! Seriously, if that isn't the coolest solution I have ever heard, I don't know what is! I've actually done this before, though I don't remember ...