Griffinkeeper

I know, I need to add more detail, trust me. I'll look at it and see what I can come up with.

The tense you are using is driving me nuts. It makes the entire thing sound more dramatic than it deserves. My eyes are unable to comment, seeing as they are ...

Comedy is hardly fiction.

Technically speaking, Gryphon=Griffin=Griffen, they are all commonly accepted spellings of the same creature. However, there are variations of gryphons that differ from the usual Lion-Eagle combinatio

A barrel roll is real simple. Imagine a barrel. Say you paint a white stripe along the side of this barrel. Now roll the barrel until that white strip comes ...

Minor typo: Dieing=dying. Doesn't seem like a sci-fi so much as fiction, but that's just my opinion. Story seems solid, clear transitions, I'd say you're going to get an A. ...

I've been there before, but I left. It is just plain evil. Any suggestions?