Griffinkeeper

As Phoenix slid down the Daishi, the other four commandos were debating where Phoenix was. "He probably wandered off to get a better position," Grif said. "He's not allowed to ...

Airsoft Sniper Rifle MechWarrior Mech Warrior Singles Sniper Scopes *Laughs at the google ads.* I love my stories. New addition next!

She glanced at him, tears streaming down her face. "I have to move..." she told him, "...far away." He stared at her, the love he had yet to tell her, ...

FYI: A Daishi is an assault mech from the popular Mechwarrior series. It weighs 100 tons and carries enough firepower to destroy other assault mechs. It is the King of ...

"Daishi?" Snoink asked. "It's a mech from Mechwarrior 4," Grif explained. "You mean that you can actually learn something from video games?" Dusky asked. "Duh," Phoenix said. "What's going on ...

This is R for rape. This is one of those things you need to rate. I can understand it if it's just G, PG, even PG-13, but this isn't cool.

*blink blink* I'm not sure where the toaster came from... Poor Llama... Poor Nakooki... What's up with his name anyway? Nakooki was just a name someone shouted out. It really ...

Words fail me.

Hmm. On the one hand it is a fairly simple rhyme. I'm going to rate this PG. Better safe than sorry.

*Rated PG-13 for Violence*

When you drop the f-bomb, it goes from PG-13 to R. *Edits Rating.* I thought it was well written. I love how you used dialogue to describe their interaction and ...

No insults, that's against the rules.

Man, your stories aren't all that fun to read. *Shakes head*

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