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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: A jumbled love letter

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    "In the start of the poem, I sense a person who is afraid to trust someone due to having been hurt badly, a feeling I can personally relate to. Then, ...

    Jul 21, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: She was the Sun, He was the Moon

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    This short passage creates a vivid contrast between two characters, emphasizing their opposing qualities and how they complement each other. The author skillfully employs the imagery of the sun and ...

    Jul 20, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: I Knew Chapter 32

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    "Hours slipped quietly by" captures the atmosphere of tension and restlessness that permeates the scene in this excerpt. The author skillfully conveys Jed's state of mind as he struggles with ...

    Jul 20, 2023
  • Poetry » Satire, Narrative Re: Antipathies: part II

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    "The Gatekeepers" is a deeply layered, philosophical exploration of humanity's struggle with power, knowledge, truth, and illusion. The author weaves together elements of politics, nature, science fic

    Jul 18, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: A jumbled love letter

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    "One look, one word is all it took" to immerse myself in the emotional roller coaster that is this heartfelt and deeply personal expression of love, self-discovery, and vulnerability. The ...

    Jul 18, 2023
  • Lyrics » Supernatural, Lyrical Re: Lucas’ song (reprise)

    Barling, I rely do hope this is just words on a page. not a glimpse of what is to come. If it is the latter please keep me out of ...

    Jul 18, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Archer's Paradox Chapter 2: The Demon Wakes

    "It feels reminiscent of Arrow, and at the beginning, Marty could easily be likened to Detective Quentin Lance, while Jay takes on the role of the retired vigilante. However, this ...

    Jun 25, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Film Re: Chapter Three: Something Bigger, Something Brighter

    In the opening of the poem, I initially sense provocative vibes. I'm not sure what I've walked into, but it certainly creates a good hook Annie then, homeland, ooooo shite! ...

    Jun 23, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Yellow: Chapter 1

    "I got a little goosebumps at the beginning and it reminded me a bit of 'The Purge,' the first movie." then you fallow up with crazy I'm not crazy then ...

    Jun 20, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Archer's Paradox Chapter 1: The Ghost

    The mentorship was a truly pleasant experience, and Jay left a lasting impression of genuine sincerity. As the story progresses, I am eagerly anticipating the evolution and growth of his ...

    Jun 20, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Dark Side of the Coffee Machine 0: The BIG boss!

    As I began to read this piece, I couldn't help but notice a striking similarity to the training academy depicted in the movie "Kingsmen." The disciplined and rigorous nature of ...

    Mar 11, 2023
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Skin Tears & Bones Break

    I Like that the adjective fleshy. David's transformation. is F ing creepy and cool, I like the sound description. using like the sound of the rain, whats going on with ...

    Mar 11, 2023


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