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Re: A jumbled love letter
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Jul 21, 2023
"In the start of the poem, I sense a person who is afraid to trust someone due to having been hurt badly, a feeling I can personally relate to. Then, ... -
Re: She was the Sun, He was the Moon
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Jul 20, 2023
This short passage creates a vivid contrast between two characters, emphasizing their opposing qualities and how they complement each other. The author skillfully employs the imagery of the sun and ... -
Re: I Knew Chapter 32
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Jul 20, 2023
"Hours slipped quietly by" captures the atmosphere of tension and restlessness that permeates the scene in this excerpt. The author skillfully conveys Jed's state of mind as he struggles with ... -
Re: Antipathies: part II
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Jul 18, 2023
"The Gatekeepers" is a deeply layered, philosophical exploration of humanity's struggle with power, knowledge, truth, and illusion. The author weaves together elements of politics, nature, science fic -
Re: A jumbled love letter
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Jul 18, 2023
"One look, one word is all it took" to immerse myself in the emotional roller coaster that is this heartfelt and deeply personal expression of love, self-discovery, and vulnerability. The ... -
Re: Lucas’ song (reprise)
Barling, I rely do hope this is just words on a page. not a glimpse of what is to come. If it is the latter please keep me out of ...
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Re: Archer's Paradox Chapter 2: The Demon Wakes
"It feels reminiscent of Arrow, and at the beginning, Marty could easily be likened to Detective Quentin Lance, while Jay takes on the role of the retired vigilante. However, this ...
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Re: Chapter Three: Something Bigger, Something Brighter
In the opening of the poem, I initially sense provocative vibes. I'm not sure what I've walked into, but it certainly creates a good hook Annie then, homeland, ooooo shite! ...
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Re: The Yellow: Chapter 1
"I got a little goosebumps at the beginning and it reminded me a bit of 'The Purge,' the first movie." then you fallow up with crazy I'm not crazy then ...
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Re: Archer's Paradox Chapter 1: The Ghost
The mentorship was a truly pleasant experience, and Jay left a lasting impression of genuine sincerity. As the story progresses, I am eagerly anticipating the evolution and growth of his ...
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Re: Dark Side of the Coffee Machine 0: The BIG boss!
As I began to read this piece, I couldn't help but notice a striking similarity to the training academy depicted in the movie "Kingsmen." The disciplined and rigorous nature of ...
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Re: Skin Tears & Bones Break
I Like that the adjective fleshy. David's transformation. is F ing creepy and cool, I like the sound description. using like the sound of the rain, whats going on with ...
Mar 11, 2023
