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Thanks a lot, Bhavya!

Thank You Tawsif. I'm so glad you liked it.

Thank you. I will definitely consider your suggestions.

Thanks Horisun! I'm glad you liked it.

Just WOW...

Thank you for your feedback. Both of your interpretations are apt. You understood my poem really well.

Thank you Alex! I'm glad you liked it.

Thank you Avery for your review. I couldn't space out stanzas as well. Once I made the font italics, I could do. Strange but it worked! Now that you pointed ...

Thank you! Actually, exams just brought it out, there was so much more. I can't possibly fit it all in the description though!

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Thank You! Yes, the repetition of words is intentional. This is actually not the first poem that I have published on YWS. Like the other two poems, I have omitted ...

Hello reader! I am looking for constructive criticism. I would also like to know if I could convey my thoughts to you. How do you feel about 'Dawn of Light' ...

Please point out the grammar mistakes, apart from any that you see in the dialogues.

Thanks for your feedback. I'm glad that you liked it. The title is a work in progress.

Nice. First impression is good. I'll review it soon.