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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Lucain & Wihara: Privat Investigation Part 1

    Ok, well, I kinda liked it, I didn't really find any parts funny, maybe its just that I don't get the references. The ideas are good, but i don't know ...

    Oct 12, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: "Escape from Loredaen Hall" chap. 1: The Letter

    Hey, this isn't a review because I don't have enough time to read the story right now, but in a MMORPG called World Of Warcraft, Loredaeron is a capital... I ...

    Oct 9, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: my first post...

    Hey, First poem I've read on this site and I like it! i always like poems that depict everyday things as something different I especially like how you showed the ...

    Oct 7, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Alexander - Swore enemies Chapter 1

    I'm confused about the tenses... "What?" Ebony said and the new student attacked again, Ebony jump towards the new student and kick him as hard as he could, but the ...

    Oct 7, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Winged Crossing- Prologue

    Only thing i noticed was - A grin formed across his peach thin lips. Alida’s eyes widened, knowing what he was going to do. “Putesco.” I got confused here, i ...

    Oct 6, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Zekkou - Chapter One

    Ok, overall i liked it, but... 1. No character descriptions or introductions 2. No reference to plot at all, i had no idea what was goin on, except they were ...

    Sep 16, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Nalakaya; Heiress of Hell

    AWESOME like really good, i'd definitely want to read more. The theme of demons and evil powers and such is interesting and captivating dark humor could be tied in nicely ...

    Sep 16, 2009


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