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Re: Lucain & Wihara: Privat Investigation Part 1
Ok, well, I kinda liked it, I didn't really find any parts funny, maybe its just that I don't get the references. The ideas are good, but i don't know ...
Oct 12, 2009 -
Re: "Escape from Loredaen Hall" chap. 1: The Letter
Hey, this isn't a review because I don't have enough time to read the story right now, but in a MMORPG called World Of Warcraft, Loredaeron is a capital... I ...
Oct 9, 2009 -
Re: my first post...
Hey, First poem I've read on this site and I like it! i always like poems that depict everyday things as something different I especially like how you showed the ...
Oct 7, 2009 -
Re: Alexander - Swore enemies Chapter 1
I'm confused about the tenses... "What?" Ebony said and the new student attacked again, Ebony jump towards the new student and kick him as hard as he could, but the ...
Oct 7, 2009 -
Re: Winged Crossing- Prologue
Only thing i noticed was - A grin formed across his peach thin lips. Alida’s eyes widened, knowing what he was going to do. “Putesco.” I got confused here, i ...
Oct 6, 2009 -
Re: Zekkou - Chapter One
Ok, overall i liked it, but... 1. No character descriptions or introductions 2. No reference to plot at all, i had no idea what was goin on, except they were ...
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: Nalakaya; Heiress of Hell
AWESOME like really good, i'd definitely want to read more. The theme of demons and evil powers and such is interesting and captivating dark humor could be tied in nicely ...
Sep 16, 2009
