GreenEyes

Thanks guys! :D And yeah, I missed a word out there it seems... thanks AngelMarie, it should be; But instead you took those things that I said Or something like ...

It will turn into a romance :) I have just always had trouble writing good intros, so I was hoping for some tips on that :P

Thanks for the review, but please don't say that the poem is 'cliche'. This is stuff that I have actually gone through, and writing was a way out, so please ...

I really, really like this poem! You've got a great style that I think is really unique! I really son't have much to say about this, you've got great grammar, ...

Just typos? Would you mind pointing them out in case I miss them?

Can I get some more feedback please?

Hey thanks for the support, though to be honest it's the fact that I suffer from depression, and they aren't helping is more the point, not that them not being ...

This is really nice, but please remember to put the capitals in!

Thanks, that review helped alot, I didn't quite realise how much I had been reeating!!! A little note is that I dug this up from ages ago, before I had ...

Thanks for the positive feedback, I like the suggestion for the line for the sister, what about for the friend; She said I was her keeper of secrets Or something ...

I'm still writing it... I wanted to see what people thought of it so far though and if i should go on with it.

I think it's really good, but there are parts where it doesn't quite roll off the tongue like "super massive" but apart from bits like that it's great!