GreenEyes

I asked my mother who I was,She said I was her daughterI asked my father who I was,He said I was his little girlI asked my sister who I was,She ...

The day I lost my heart was the day I lost him. He was my reason for existence, my reason to get up each morning, the one that was in ...

OK, this is something I wrote absolutely ages ago, but I was just wondering what other people thought of it. I've written better stuff since then I need to put ...

My mask is slipping,The cracks are showing.This screen that I made,Is starting to fall downI’ve covered my feelings,For so many yearsI’ve bottled them up,And written them awayYou can see my ...

Ok, this is maybe slightly similar to some of my other work, but that's because I mainly write when I'm going through things and writing helps me through it.Here I ...

This is a story that I've started writing, and I was just hoping for some feedback on it, to see how it was going and if it grasped people's attention. ...

I know I've not broken it up into stanzas, but that was deliberate. And I've rambled on a bit... I look with disinterest at the dripping blood,It dribbles slowly down ...

This isn't the best work I've done, it's kind of sloppy to be honest, but I'd like feedback on it anyway That’s it for me now,I’ve given up on you.You’ve ...