GrayLynx

I know the feeling. The poem is concise yet cryptic enough to think over, and the meter is kinda good too.

It was horrible. Next time add details and description. It's written like a script rather than a short story, which is supposed to have descriptive set up.

Atheists...

There wasn't much mastery in the English Language, it was more conceptual than musically pleasing. I feel as though you also overused the italicizes, and the premise was melodramatically delivered.

You are evil, I am evil. Now you realize it. It's a good thing you realized it at this point. The truth of the matter is we do evil deeds ...

Ain't bad. Parts of it come across as too generic and unoriginal though, but it's fanfic so that aint really a sin. It's kind of hard to follow the logic ...

This is a cute intro. You seem to set up the main themes very fast in this tidbit. It's apparently a story about friendship and transformation, kind of like a ...

It's not a bad prologue. Pikes my curiosity enough. The gore imagery is lovely. I love slasher fiction, and I think you pulled it off in a way that was ...